I’d rather be lithe and living amongst the trees, climbing with a song,
dancing barefoot on oak limbs.
I’d rather fall
onto soft tufts of greenish yellow grassy fields than onto mute, solid cement,
in a place where nobody lets loose, just stalking the setting the sun,
sulking with their cigarettes, their achy feet and fast food binging lullabies.
Pounding pavement,
dissing the greens,
does not appeal to me.
I’d rather be
climbing the cool pines,
breathing in their musky scent,
wandering out of the rain,
napping and seeking joy with no refrain.
I’d rather be climbing
than staying on the ground
or having my feet dangling
from peaks upon the clouds.
This post was inspired by a piece on my friend’s Jaya’s WordPress. If you haven’t read her work, you definitely should π
What a fabulous piece of writing! I just love the contrast between elements and wishes, and am honored to have helped inspire it. β€
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Always β€οΈ your writing is so uniquely your own. I don’t know how else to approach describing your work π . It takes us to places that are enigmatic and sensual and lamenting. I love it. I am constantly searching for writing that invokes feeling and yours does that. π
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Wow, thank you so much!!
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Any time, my friend! It’s all true!! π
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A lovely write! Awesome.
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Thank you, Jeff π I appreciate you stopping by and being so kind ! I hope you’re having a good week πβΊοΈ stay safe
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Youβre welcome, always! Itβs my pleasure. Ah, the weeks been grand, thank you. Happy weekend! π
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“cool pines, musky scent.. ” you took me there, thank you.
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Thank you β€οΈ I appreciate you stopping by and letting me know how this made you feel. I love pine trees. When I was a kid, I really did hide in pine trees. I’d perch on the lower bough and watch the rain until it stopped. It felt like such an adventure. I was devastated when my neighbors had to cut the tree down. Have a great weekend my friend ππ
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β€ you too
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Thank you π
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As someone who enjoys being surrounded by nature, this poem really resonated with me and brought me back to my happy place. Thanks for sharing. Linda
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Thank you, Linda π I’m happy to hear this π your kind words made my day
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http://amarspiritualhealing.home.blog/2022/09/06/conversations-with-the-heart-2-1/
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Beautiful words and such a majestic tree. π
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Thank you, Gia!!! I love trees. They make me feel so at peace βοΈ
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Awww this is so beautiful!
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Thank you so much β€οΈ π₯°
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Youβre welcome πππ
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